Walking hand in hand
In the city of light
I secretly promised
To walk side by side
Carrying me in your arms
At the top of La Tour Eiffel
You secretly promised
To carry me when I am feeble
Watching the amazing dance moves
Of the classy sassy Moulin Rouge
I secretly promised
To turn your mourning into dancing rouge
Wrapping your arms around me
In the moonlight midnight
You secretly promised
To hold me tight when there is no hope of light
Dining together on the exotic cruise
Of the majestic river Seine
I secretly promised
To love you deep deep as a river Seine
Watching the whimsy cuddly characters
Of the magical hilarious Disney
You secretly promised
To cuddle me to hilarity in misery
Lightning a candle and praying
In the Gothic loftiness of Notre Dame
We secretly promised
To cling to our promises till forever ends
Your poetry has a lyrical quality in them... and i cud actually feel the commitment behind them as u write ur heart out.
ReplyDeleteThe song "From the moment on", by Shania Twain is too close to ur composition...
Will look out for more such writings in the coming days!
straight from the heart! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Manti!!
ReplyDeleteWell my first attempt and what else could have been better reason than this.I guess the mutual feeling towards the shared moments made it easier for me to write what seemed impossible to me.
@Ahmeds Indeed it is :):)
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